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  1. January 20th, 2008, 05:02 #1
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    You may remember I was attempting to write a short story. I consider it a failed attempt and I'm not satisfied with it one bit. I did finish writing it, so my question for you guys is this. Would you guys actually read the thing and give me a rating on how good I did? I have a good idea for a different short story that has lots of potential.
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    Sure I could help you!, where is it?.
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    Sure, I'd read it!
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    Send your story down my way, I won't mind giving it a read. Who knows, it may be all that bad as you think perhaps.
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    Pass it to me E-X
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    Quote Originally Posted by ExcruciationX View Post
    You may remember I was attempting to write a short story. I consider it a failed attempt and I'm not satisfied with it one bit. I did finish writing it, so my question for you guys is this. Would you guys actually read the thing and give me a rating on how good I did? I have a good idea for a different short story that has lots of potential.
    What's the story about? JKKDARK?
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  7. January 20th, 2008, 19:03 #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by JKKDARK View Post
    What's the story about? JKKDARK?
    No, but if I wrote one about you, you wouldn't like it

    Once I get access to a computer, I'll release it here (probably tomorrow).
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