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1stvinicius
December 28th, 2005, 17:40
Just forget the magical drop 3 (released only for neo aes). Ive made a mistake. This is old but it stll rocks. (http://img440.imageshack.us/my.php?i...osdlemu3mf.jpg)

Jdemon
December 30th, 2005, 04:19
ERRO 403 - Acesso Proibido.

Caro usuário,
A página que você acessou não foi encontrada.
No CriandoSite, você certamente encontrará tudo o que deseja.

Em caso de dúvidas, contate-nos.


Babelfish Translation from Portuguese:

ERROR 403 - Forbidden Access.

Expensive user,
the page that you he had access was found.
In the CriandoSite, you certainly he will find everything what he desires.
In case of doubts, he contacts us.

:D

Darksaviour69
December 30th, 2005, 13:07
works for me, looks nice. is it just the back cover for now?

ptr.exe
December 30th, 2005, 18:00
works for me, looks sweet. nice work :)

1stvinicius
December 31st, 2005, 16:43
works for me, looks sweet. nice work :)

Did you see? Did you see? Yeah dude!! Thanks for the support. Now here we go with my newest SBI theme: http://fotosdc.i-jogo.net//animacao.gif :)


Expensive user,
the page that you he had access was found.
In the CriandoSite, you certainly he will find everything what he desires.
In case of doubts, he contacts us.

Hey dude, the correct translation is this:

"Dear user,
The page you requested cannot be found.
In the "Criandosite", You'll certainly find everything you wish.

Any questions, contact us."

So you didn't get the page? Ok, then go to www.cdcovers.cc, find covers (the icon is on the top blue bar), go to the dreamcast section and then, click on letter N. There you'll find some covers. Search for this one: 'Neo Geo Sdl Emu 4 Dc customized Corrected ntsc-back' (i made the front cover too but i think it isnt that good).

Now i'd like to ask you guys about my grammar on the cover. Is my english ok or is it in need of some improvements? Thank you guys for any help and have happy new year!

1stvinicius
December 31st, 2005, 17:04
works for me, looks nice. is it just the back cover for now?

No. In www.cdcovers.cc you'll fnd the front one. go to the dc covers section there and then go to letter n. The name is 'Neo Geo Sdl Emu 4 Dc customized Corrected ntsc-front' but i dont think its as nice as the back cover...

Jdemon
January 3rd, 2006, 20:46
Thanks, I got them now :D Very nice job.

About the grammer...

"But now that dream become reality with..."

You don't have to use the "But" if you don't want to. The sentence is more powerfull without it I think.

"that dream become reality" should be
that dream becomes reality
that dream becomes a reality
that dream has become a reality

"Just turn it on, place this disc , swap..."
I'd say boot this disc "place this disc" isn't really a complete thought.

1stvinicius
January 5th, 2006, 21:49
Thanks, I got them now :D Very nice job.

About the grammer...

"But now that dream become reality with..."

You don't have to use the "But" if you don't want to. The sentence is more powerfull without it I think.

"that dream become reality" should be
that dream becomes reality
that dream becomes a reality
that dream has become a reality

"Just turn it on, place this disc , swap..."
I'd say boot this disc "place this disc" isn't really a complete thought.

Nice, pal. That advice of yours was very handy! By the way, i forgot to correct another thing on the cover. Neogeo games are from the 90's decade and i wrote 80's on it but that is easy for anyone to fix.

supersonic
January 10th, 2006, 20:55
yeah..nice ....

Fender
April 25th, 2006, 19:13
Pretty good!