El-Mayo#1 Feedback Much Appreciated.

[Cokemusic]

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Edition one is pretty short , future editions will probably be 2-3 pages each however this edition is aimed mainly at getting feedback ( you feed back will probably determine the future of El-Mayo so be honest and constructive please on how I can imrpove)

Anyone offering any input into the project is more than welcome.

[ninja9393]

its pretty good for the first one!

my one problem is i dont like the guy on the 2nd to last panel look

it looks like a gald white chinese guy

[Evon von Vampdragn]

This is awsome, i like how your putting this situation in a comic form.

[Cokemusic]

Thanx , the whole FORUM/MMORPG attitude is also something i've been interested in , I guess i'm just keen to present it through my eyes.

[Evon von Vampdragn]

Love the title.

[gdf]

aha, pretty cool!!!!