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ExcruciationX
November 16th, 2007, 22:05
Remember when I said it'd be the end of the year before I released this sucker?

SYKE!

Start reading!

Download and blah blah blah, Via Comments

EDIT: Removed the link, I'll re-release it later.
gdf
November 16th, 2007, 22:16
HOLY SHIT!

Well done Ex, you followed through ^_^
ExcruciationX
November 16th, 2007, 22:16
:D

Yup, I did.
gdf
November 16th, 2007, 22:18
So far it's pretty damn good as well :)
ExcruciationX
November 16th, 2007, 22:22
That's good to hear. :)
JKKDARK
November 16th, 2007, 22:26
I thought you coded a homebrew game :p
ExcruciationX
November 16th, 2007, 22:29
That must be why I'm getting views...

I'll edit the title.
The King
November 16th, 2007, 22:37
I thought you coded a homebrew game :p
i thout that too lol
ExcruciationX
November 16th, 2007, 22:41
Maybe a game adaption of it would be awesome...

I should do like High School Musical, make an ice show, a video game (FPS?), a musical stage show, etc.
gdf
November 17th, 2007, 00:17
A HSM FPS sounds like fun: Butcher the whole cast using only a pump action and your cojones!
ExcruciationX
November 17th, 2007, 00:26
Yeah.

"You splattered Sharpay."
Johnny Rash
November 17th, 2007, 06:06
You even told me you'd be done around the new year, ya' bastard!

I shall begin reading!

I expect nothing but the greatest!

This better be frontpaged or hurt will be bestowed upon many! :D

Seriously...I totally didn't see that coming.
ExcruciationX
November 17th, 2007, 06:10
That's the point to surprise even the draft readers! :)

MMWAHAHAA!
Johnny Rash
November 17th, 2007, 08:57
Printer = shit.

Eyes = hurting from glaring CRT.

Reading = Tomorrow.

I hate CRTs.
I feel like I'm being shot in the face with radiation!
Johnny Rash
November 17th, 2007, 14:08
Sorry.

Yeah, I know.
Double posting, bad Johnny Rash!

So, I just finished reading.
Before I begin...I laughed real hard when I saw the DA/M-33 reference! :rofl:

But, there are still parts that need correcting and some minor grammatical issues.

It's a good story. I liked what you did with the combat.
But I felt, as a gamer, I needed more details of battle. (Which you delivered later in the story.)

I'll discuss more of that with you if you want.
I'm coming to realization that DCEmu members don't read books...
gdf
November 17th, 2007, 15:35
I'm pretty sure Ex reads a lot, he's a smrt, I mean, smart guy.
cal360
November 17th, 2007, 15:40
I glad to see this released. I'm going to start reading this straight away. Good work.
ExcruciationX
November 18th, 2007, 04:59
Thanks guys!

Now, to work on my next one!
V3N0M
November 18th, 2007, 07:30
Very cool! I'm going to read this on my PSP with that new version of bookr. I'm looking forward to future developments! Think you could add in some artwork next time?
ExcruciationX
November 18th, 2007, 17:49
I'd recommend you print it out. It's in a PDF for that reason.

Also, I've posted a trivia thread that explains the book's meaning.