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ExcruciationX
January 20th, 2008, 05:02
You may remember I was attempting to write a short story. I consider it a failed attempt and I'm not satisfied with it one bit. I did finish writing it, so my question for you guys is this. Would you guys actually read the thing and give me a rating on how good I did? I have a good idea for a different short story that has lots of potential.
mexicansnake
January 20th, 2008, 05:35
Sure I could help you!, where is it?.
Napalm-Death
January 20th, 2008, 06:36
Sure, I'd read it!
Shrygue
January 20th, 2008, 15:59
Send your story down my way, I won't mind giving it a read. Who knows, it may be all that bad as you think perhaps.
dejkirkby
January 20th, 2008, 16:50
Pass it to me E-X
JKKDARK
January 20th, 2008, 16:59
You may remember I was attempting to write a short story. I consider it a failed attempt and I'm not satisfied with it one bit. I did finish writing it, so my question for you guys is this. Would you guys actually read the thing and give me a rating on how good I did? I have a good idea for a different short story that has lots of potential.

What's the story about? JKKDARK? :)
ExcruciationX
January 20th, 2008, 19:03
What's the story about? JKKDARK? :)
No, but if I wrote one about you, you wouldn't like it :p

Once I get access to a computer, I'll release it here (probably tomorrow).