My first flash Hits Newgrounds

Hi all, kind of a busy weekend for me as I spent most of my time putting the finishing toushes on my first ever flash cartoon (though I was unable to get the fricken sound to work right). :D

Anyways, I submitted it to newgrounds, and its in (with a 2.7/5 rating). Watch, rate and tell me what you think. Thanks

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/344258
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not bad. not that funny,
but i couldnt do better. im shite.

I kno, it seemed a lot funnier when I came up with the idea three months ago. It was my first try so I didn't really expect great reviews. My next one will be funnier... promise ;)

its pretty good tho i know flash i have, made flash movies lots mustve took a very looong time 2 do this 1

too long :D