And presenting....
Well, I finished my first cartoon today (sort of, it still needs a bit of work to clean it up, but this is basically what it will look like). I made it for the christmas edition of my school newspaper. That should hopefully explain why it's about christmas.
Any feedback is much appreciated ( i think that that the 2nd and 4th frames need the most attention personally)
EDIT: I have now also attached the original for those curious to see the transformation