New Sig - Messed around abit - Need Comments.

Indeed, i just wanted to try something completly new.

I want your critism so i can improve.

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u...m/samussig.png

Shall I use it?

In my honest opinion it is...
























Good. Better than your current sig.

I say it looks ace and you ought to use it.

Thanks guys.

If JKK says its ok, it musnt be that bad ;)

Dude, that is ****ing gorgeous!

Thanks dude, I wasnt too sure you guys would like this one.

Cool..

i dont really like the overlay border or whatever that is.
everything else is cool man

Not bad, but you need to clean the focal. It's too blurry. It makes the sig look amateur.

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Originally Posted by Buddy4point0

i dont really like the overlay border or whatever that is.
everything else is cool man

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Actually, nor do I.

What would you recomend? Just a solid border? Or a semi-transparent one? or what?

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Originally Posted by Cheyzak

Not bad, but you need to clean the focal. It's too blurry. It makes the sig look amateur.

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Sorry, can you explain that so I can understand? :o

It is a very good sig, but i think, you've made it a bit too dark, just a little bit more brighter and this sig would be much better!

I agree with Cheyzak, its a bit blurry.

Looks nice. I think that it may look better (clearer) if you could try to make Samus' head a bit more noticable as it kinda dissappears too much for my liking, looking separate from the body. Then again if that was your intention then keep it as it is, as it looks good anyway. Actually, I like that I can't make it all out straight away. Gives me a reason to actually look at it if you know what I mean, so all in all, I don't know what I'm talking about. :D

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Originally Posted by Triv1um

Actually, nor do I.

What would you recomend? Just a solid border? Or a semi-transparent one? or what?



Sorry, can you explain that so I can understand? :o

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Let's see. Focal is the main, the most important part of the sig. It is a point or an area in the sig (in this case it's Samus' head) that allows you too see the whole signature when you look at it. That is to say that your eyes feel comfortable there, they are resting on it. The use of flow, depth, good coloring and other stuff, is to enchance the focal, so that it is better noticeable (ie the using flow, you "guide" the viewers eyes to the focal where he is supposed to look at). In this sig, focal (Samus' head) is blurred, giving the sig a messy look, and the lack of depth. If you have any further questions, I'll be happy to answer. Cheers :D