you should add Platform at the top, I added them to 1945 etc for you. eg:
Platform: Xbox 360 (Reviewed), PS3, PC, NDS, PSP
also, I change the price line:
MSRP: 800 MS point ($10, £6.80, €9.30)
edit:
I mistake you seem to do alot:
Thats = That's
hes = he's
spelling:
reptitive = repetitive
maneuvering = manoeuvring
(not a big deal but i changed GWRE to GW:RE)
I think the 4th paragraph after the second picture is very long, you might want to break it up into 2 paragraphs or so
Also use [center] to center pics. And for the pic you can make them links to a higher rez screen shot via:
[url=http://www.dcemu.dreamhosters.com/pics/d/247-3/gwre2_screen_1.jpg][img]http://www.dcemu.dreamhosters.com/pics/d/246-4/gwre2_screen_1.jpg (close tags)
I bolded the first paragraph, think its looks better (as most reviewers seem to do that)
Also I think as a general rule, you should have a pic every 2-3 paragraphs, cause its look too wordy in the middle (between the 2nd and 3rd paragraph)
Major Breaking points: maybe add lack of LIVE play
Replay Value: 9/10
6 gameplay modes will have you constantly going back to try and better your score, and leaderboards will have you bettering other peoples scores too. If it had online life would be much better. i don't understand that line
other than that, a great review, can't believed you reviewed it so quickly
btw sorry for the poor layout of this post, i just kept added to it as i read though the review
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