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    ERRO 403 - Acesso Proibido.

    Caro usuário,
    A página que você acessou não foi encontrada.
    No CriandoSite, você certamente encontrará tudo o que deseja.

    Em caso de dúvidas, contate-nos.


    Babelfish Translation from Portuguese:

    ERROR 403 - Forbidden Access.

    Expensive user,
    the page that you he had access was found.
    In the CriandoSite, you certainly he will find everything what he desires.
    In case of doubts, he contacts us.


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    works for me, looks nice. is it just the back cover for now?

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    works for me, looks sweet. nice work

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    Quote Originally Posted by ptr.exe
    works for me, looks sweet. nice work
    Did you see? Did you see? Yeah dude!! Thanks for the support. Now here we go with my newest SBI theme: http://fotosdc.i-jogo.net//animacao.gif

    Quote Originally Posted by jdemon
    Expensive user,
    the page that you he had access was found.
    In the CriandoSite, you certainly he will find everything what he desires.
    In case of doubts, he contacts us.
    Hey dude, the correct translation is this:

    "Dear user,
    The page you requested cannot be found.
    In the "Criandosite", You'll certainly find everything you wish.

    Any questions, contact us."

    So you didn't get the page? Ok, then go to www.cdcovers.cc, find covers (the icon is on the top blue bar), go to the dreamcast section and then, click on letter N. There you'll find some covers. Search for this one: 'Neo Geo Sdl Emu 4 Dc customized Corrected ntsc-back' (i made the front cover too but i think it isnt that good).

    Now i'd like to ask you guys about my grammar on the cover. Is my english ok or is it in need of some improvements? Thank you guys for any help and have happy new year!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Darksaviour69
    works for me, looks nice. is it just the back cover for now?
    No. In www.cdcovers.cc you'll fnd the front one. go to the dc covers section there and then go to letter n. The name is 'Neo Geo Sdl Emu 4 Dc customized Corrected ntsc-front' but i dont think its as nice as the back cover...

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    Thanks, I got them now Very nice job.

    About the grammer...

    "But now that dream become reality with..."

    You don't have to use the "But" if you don't want to. The sentence is more powerfull without it I think.

    "that dream become reality" should be
    that dream becomes reality
    that dream becomes a reality
    that dream has become a reality

    "Just turn it on, place this disc , swap..."
    I'd say boot this disc "place this disc" isn't really a complete thought.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jdemon
    Thanks, I got them now Very nice job.

    About the grammer...

    "But now that dream become reality with..."

    You don't have to use the "But" if you don't want to. The sentence is more powerfull without it I think.

    "that dream become reality" should be
    that dream becomes reality
    that dream becomes a reality
    that dream has become a reality

    "Just turn it on, place this disc , swap..."
    I'd say boot this disc "place this disc" isn't really a complete thought.
    Nice, pal. That advice of yours was very handy! By the way, i forgot to correct another thing on the cover. Neogeo games are from the 90's decade and i wrote 80's on it but that is easy for anyone to fix.

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    yeah..nice ....

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    Pretty good!

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