Right I jsut read that fully, didnt miss a line and read it twice
My Opinion...
...Not spoiling it for people that may read this and stuff...
...ITS BRILLIANT FOR A START
I love the way this story starts as well and already you have introduced sorta cameo characters, great beginning, I could actually build on this however that would be for my personal pleasure haha, really good keep going anyway because I for 1 am pleased that this is going to probabily be the story![]()
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