The Land of Kornsuccubus (short story) RELEASED!

[ExcruciationX]

Yeah.

"You splattered Sharpay."

[Johnny Rash]

You even told me you'd be done around the new year, ya' bastard!

I shall begin reading!

I expect nothing but the greatest!

This better be frontpaged or hurt will be bestowed upon many!

Seriously...I totally didn't see that coming.

[ExcruciationX]

That's the point to surprise even the draft readers!

MMWAHAHAA!

[Johnny Rash]

Printer = $#@!.

Eyes = hurting from glaring CRT.

Reading = Tomorrow.

I hate CRTs.
I feel like I'm being shot in the face with radiation!

[Johnny Rash]

Sorry.

Yeah, I know.
Double posting, bad Johnny Rash!

So, I just finished reading.
Before I begin...I laughed real hard when I saw the DA/M-33 reference! :rofl:

But, there are still parts that need correcting and some minor grammatical issues.

It's a good story. I liked what you did with the combat.
But I felt, as a gamer, I needed more details of battle. (Which you delivered later in the story.)

I'll discuss more of that with you if you want.
I'm coming to realization that DCEmu members don't read books...

[gdf]

I'm pretty sure Ex reads a lot, he's a smrt, I mean, smart guy.

[cal360]

I glad to see this released. I'm going to start reading this straight away. Good work.

[ExcruciationX]

Thanks guys!

Now, to work on my next one!

[V3N0M]

Very cool! I'm going to read this on my PSP with that new version of bookr. I'm looking forward to future developments! Think you could add in some artwork next time?

[ExcruciationX]

I'd recommend you print it out. It's in a PDF for that reason.

Also, I've posted a trivia thread that explains the book's meaning.