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    Default The Sanitary Urn (Poem by me)

    Don't try and forget your shortcomings
    Happiness is a stones throw away
    But your load is a heavy one
    And your throwing arm is tiring
    And the only satisfaction I can reap from my despondency
    Is the truth of the existence of those that stand above me
    Crippled in this kingdom of carpets and switches
    Im only a hobo
    Let guilt bind me
    And pull me into contentedness
    Ill be a fridge magnet
    Or a sticky yellow reminder of a missed appointment
    Im digging my palm now into my thigh
    Pawing blind
    In that drunken odourless void of unimaginable infinity
    The hardy fisherman teases the rope
    Back to the boat via my very own veins.
    Ill hide in my slumber
    Ill recharge my sleepy bones
    Tomorrow is looming so professionally
    I must admire his persistence
    His rough claws palming at my aching back
    Service with a bow-tie
    Good morning

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    ...

    Okay.

    Taken anything lately?

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    It is very cryptic and hard to read a lot into.
    When I'm getting is hints of despondency intertwined with moments of happiness, kind of like two people (or personalities) conserving.

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    Dang, I can't understand it. The Grey Isle was easy to understand.

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